You're right! this is good! i like it alot dude! Alot of the shots, however, looked very similar. Maybe try to have just a little more variety. I mean you did have long, medium, and close-ups...but try to space them out a little more. otherwise i really liked it!
I think you had a great, interesting story and for a first time video--- not bad at all. just need to smooth transitions between cuts, i liked how when he got low to skate, you did too and changed angles---
Hey Derek, this is really good. My favorite part was the sequence where the skater is trying to land the trick over and over. I didn't think this was going to be about skating from the title, but it makes sense. NICE JOB!
Well done sir. I like the video. I really do. I think you have a good eye for capturing moving imagery. I would just suggest stepping back a couple of times for wider frames.
I love the video capture of him trying and failing over and over again. I think you have a good future in video.
i know we saw this in class...i just wanted to say: i think you have an eye for video :) i'm impressed. also, if the viewer knows your subject at all, i think they will know that you have completely captured his essence in your video. great job!
My name is Derek. I'm a journalism major with a photo concentration. My interests include photography, playing tennis, hanging out with friends, and watching movies. In the future I'd like to work for a newspaper or magazine as a photojournalist
You're right! this is good! i like it alot dude! Alot of the shots, however, looked very similar. Maybe try to have just a little more variety. I mean you did have long, medium, and close-ups...but try to space them out a little more. otherwise i really liked it!
ReplyDeleteNot bad Stonebraker. The interview shots were distracting when you zoomed out. The ending was a little awkward as well.
ReplyDeleteI think you had a great, interesting story and for a first time video--- not bad at all. just need to smooth transitions between cuts, i liked how when he got low to skate, you did too and changed angles---
ReplyDeleteHey Derek, this is really good. My favorite part was the sequence where the skater is trying to land the trick over and over. I didn't think this was going to be about skating from the title, but it makes sense. NICE JOB!
ReplyDeleteWell done sir. I like the video. I really do. I think you have a good eye for capturing moving imagery. I would just suggest stepping back a couple of times for wider frames.
ReplyDeleteI love the video capture of him trying and failing over and over again. I think you have a good future in video.
i know we saw this in class...i just wanted to say: i think you have an eye for video :) i'm impressed. also, if the viewer knows your subject at all, i think they will know that you have completely captured his essence in your video. great job!
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